Go on and ask me “what are you trying to do?
This flower, its nothing, nothing like
you.”
Good morning all yes its time to get
up,
the sun raises, a volcano ready to erupt.
Perked up on a warm summer
day,
nothing like the suns bright rays,
To make me feel garish and light,
I sparkle like a firefly ready to take flight.
I feel the sun as I try to resist,
Ready, I am for that cooling mist.
As the sunset begins, the light descends,
The night stars instigate a blend.
It’s a new dawn, a new day,
The sun rises to fight the grey.
As I mature I may imbue others
with the joy, happiness, and brightness of my
colors.
We are very alike, the flower and I,
I believe I did it, I convinced you didn’t I?
A poem with a picture, look at the caption.
Like this flower, my name is Jasmine.
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| Jasmine flower |

This is so sweet, and nice and i really liked the picture and rhyme scheme
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ReplyDeleteJust like you, beautiful and amazing. It explained you. :)
ReplyDeleteThat was sooo cute I really liked it, good job.
ReplyDeleteI love the incorporation of the flower to the your name and of the rhyme scheme that you followed with your poem. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteI love your rhyme scheme. I love you white girl ohh and that ending was beautiful :) white girl :) ohh good job.... white girl.... my white girl
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this was like so sweet!!! :D i liked how you used descriptions of a flower as like your name!! it was a really pretty poem and i liked the rhyming! SOOO GOODDD!!! :D
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you rhymed...if that makes sense. But it was a great poem!
ReplyDeleteIts really hard to rhyme
ReplyDeleteGood job :)
what a awesome poem,nice rhyme scheme too!
ReplyDeleteThat was so beautiful. You did an amazing job. :) I liked how well you did your ryhming. Youre so cute :) I love you jas<3
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, this is the best piece you've ever written! Sounded amazing, you rhymed really well and you should be proud. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome Job! <3
I like how yours rhymed and had a rhythm to it. Just like you said, you convinced me that you're just like the flower. I thought your description of the sunrise was BEAUTIFUL. c:
ReplyDeleteHI(: I thought you did great with your poem. I loved every single aspect of it. You really showed people you could write a poem. Remember when you said it was impossible? Guess not. It was AMAZING!
ReplyDeleteI liked that you didn't just write about your name, but that you had something to describe as well. You also had a very good flow with how you wrote it and you tied the two together very well.
ReplyDeletei loved your poem, the picture was great!
ReplyDeleteI love the poem over all. I love how you started your poem with the story of the flower. I also love the pic of the flower, thats soo cutee!!
ReplyDeleteI liked how it had an actualy rhyme scheme to it and how you added the picture of a flower and said that you're both alike. it was really good.
ReplyDeletei loved the rhyme scheme :) and the flower is beautiful just like your poem and you!
ReplyDeletei believe again.... I BELIEVE!!!!!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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